Once upon a time, there were many birds in an apple-tree, on a large island in the Pacific Ocean.
Three of these birds were brothers; called Blue, Purple and Grey.
One day, they were flying by the park and then they saw a big group of humans watching something.
They flew on a statue and they could hardly see, but then they saw it! It was a small cat that had been hit by a car.
They flew on a statue and they could hardly see, but then they saw it! It was a small cat that had been hit by a car.
People went away and the birds soon came to see the cat. This had a broken leg and was unconscious. Despite the fear that had the cat, the birds took care of him.
As days passed, the cat gets better, it was very hungry. He didn’t think and was released on Blue.
Blue stopped the cat, and this looked at the bird and he remembered that these birds had taken care of him. So he thought and act with their feelings and not with his instinct.
Since then, the cat takes care of the tree so that anyone can try to attack the birds.
Blue stopped the cat, and this looked at the bird and he remembered that these birds had taken care of him. So he thought and act with their feelings and not with his instinct.
Since then, the cat takes care of the tree so that anyone can try to attack the birds.
Cami :) I think that it's a nice story, because you learn something really important at the end. but :c I think that the final sentence : " the cat guarding " is not right, so you should check it :. that's all, good job!
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Cami, I really liked your story, but I think that you are to check puntuation and grammar. For example: He don’t thought and was released on Blue.
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Caro
thank you girls, i'm going to check that mistakes right now :D!
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